heart raging within
let all anger dissipate
leaving the Earth cold
remaining heat ferments till
mature seasons overtake
is there
a new planet
emerging somewhere there
amanogawa celebrates
rebirth
monotonous orbits endure
restructuring prevails
survival calls
for change
regurgigating
mackerel clouds conceal change
seasons blitz their way
Tanka Tuesday- 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge
“Don’t watch the clock; do what it does. Keep going.” – Sam Levenson

Fabulous poetry, Reena. 🩵
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Thank you so much!
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You’re so welcome, Reena.
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Marvelous, Reena. 🌞
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Thank you so much, Gwen!
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Yes! Applause, applause!
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Thanks!
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*applause!* fantastic, Reena! ❤
~David
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Thank you so much!
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Well done my friend
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Thanks again! 😊
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🩷
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Love this poem reena! Well done it is so beautiful!
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Thanks so much!
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Beautiful, a healing poem.
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Glad you see it this way.
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😊
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