Will this work?
holding setting suns
till they melt
-inherit
fading light to permeate
my dark existence
I see stars
stretch non-existent
arms towards
my dwindling
form – to include me in their
borrowed lights night club
memberships
will not work for me
if they suck
out all that
I’ve held on to justify
my sunless courtyards
Liquid Sun!
Take me with you to
whichever
land you go
your inseparable part
not mere reflection

I want to go too – to wherever the ‘liquid sun’ leads.
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Let ‘s go 👍🌄
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Reena, this C is such an evocative and heartfelt poem. Thanks for joining in.
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Glad you liked it, Sadje!
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Indeed 🫶🏼
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