What separates us now is a hazy veil
ignorance, misunderstanding or a vile game
we don’t see eye-to-eye, distrust prevails
vision is not lost, but it’s not the same
ignorance, misunderstanding or a vile game
the knife in my back hurts, it’s intense pain
vision is not lost, but it’s not the same
I’ve learnt my lessons, so no tears reign
the knife in my back hurts, it’s intense pain
What separates us now is a hazy veil
I’ve learnt my lessons, so no tears reign
we don’t see eye-to-eye, distrust prevails
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“distrust prevails” is basically the best antidote to the bullshit out there.
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We don’t have too many options 🙂
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True
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Thus, good fences make good neighbors. Well done, Reena.
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Fantastic quote! 👏👏
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I do wish that poetry and I could understand each other. I do struggle to comment.
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Your comment is unique ☺️ So, you don’t struggle.
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Amazing take, Reena.
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Seriously, I had a severe backache issue for just one day when I found out I’ve been two-timed by a lawyer friend, who was engaged to fight a case for me.
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OMG! ye two timing karne walonkoneend kaise aati hai.
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I really like this poetic form. The repetition gives more importance to what is expressed. Well done,
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Thank you, Linda! It’s a pantoum.
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Yes, I saw that in your tags and remembered seeing it before 🙂
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Live and learn. Glad she learns from her experiences. Some don’t.
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That’s true. Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Great take Reena
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Thank you so much!
The first lines that came to mind were “Yeh jo chilman hai, dushman hai hamari”. The rest is a take-off ☺️
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Ah! An iconic line.
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🙂
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👍🏼
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