#Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge Posted on January 11, 2022 by Reena Saxena loud thunderunseasonal fearsurprised sun https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2022/01/11/tankatuesday-poetry-challenge-no-256-colleens-specific-form-haiku/ Share this: Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window) WhatsApp TweetLike Loading...
Yes, it works, and well. I like that surprised sun at the end. I can recall days like this. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
For some reason, this poem reminded me of my days of living in Panama, where it would rain on one side of the street and have the sun shining on the other. Your middle line ties the other two together so perfectly. Love it! 🙂 LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
I agree with David. Unseasonal is an excellent choice of word. It explains the surprised sun! I like this haiku, Reena. ❤ LikeLiked by 3 people Reply
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Wonderful haiku.
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Thank you, Jude!
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Yes, it works, and well. I like that surprised sun at the end. I can recall days like this.
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Thank you so much, D.Avery!
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For some reason, this poem reminded me of my days of living in Panama, where it would rain on one side of the street and have the sun shining on the other. Your middle line ties the other two together so perfectly. Love it! 🙂
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It happens quite often here. Thank you, Yvette!
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Well done, Reena!
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Thank you so much!
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Wonderf, Reena 💕🙂
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Thank you so much!
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I agree with David. Unseasonal is an excellent choice of word. It explains the surprised sun! I like this haiku, Reena. ❤
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Thank you, Colleen!
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Nice!
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Thanks!
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I really like this word 🙂
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David
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Thank you, David!
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