Night Sky

Posted on September 22, 2020 by Reena Saxena

By Jonatan Pie

my hours are finite
not yours – milestones crossed are not
light years – to reach you

limited journeys
destinations beckon – feel
dwarfed by You, Night Sky

yet, I drive on with
You as a companion for
aeons yet to come

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Marje @ Kyrosmagica says:

September 27, 2020 at 5:51 am

Lovely. 🙂

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  September 27, 2020 at 10:07 am
  
  Thank you!
  
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Colleen M. Chesebro says:

September 23, 2020 at 5:32 pm

Well done, Reena. I love all the emotions in your senryu. Excellent. ❤

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  September 24, 2020 at 4:11 am
  
  Thank you, Colleen!
  
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willowdot21 says:

September 22, 2020 at 8:09 am

Beautiful 💜

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  September 22, 2020 at 8:10 am
  
  Thank you, Willow!
  
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  1. willowdot21 says:
    
    September 22, 2020 at 8:45 am
    
    A pleasure 💜
    
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kimbladeswritingblog says:

September 22, 2020 at 8:04 am

Brilliant! The sky, whether night or day, is infinite in every way.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  September 22, 2020 at 8:09 am
  
  Thank you, Kim! I don’t know who created the horizon, and put limitations on our thought process.
  
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