Tell me now
what’s the other side?
you will know soon
if by rules you abide
Take me, if you will
but just wait a moment
what if I’m not happy?
I’ll return, not lament…
Hold on, dear woman
it’s not an option you have
commitments are one-way
then, you are just a slave
Hold on, love, listen to me
we part ways - here and now
I’m not a lesser being
In case you din’t know
the world is a-changing
slowly, but sure
you see fireballs here
no maidens demure
Hold on, dear woman
help me with it
this is how I grew up
I thought it legit
The world is a-changing
but it passed me by
help me with new wings
with you – let me fly
Very well written. This is the problem they grew like this, they couldn’t understand when and how the world is changing. The last lines show hope.
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Thank you, Indira!
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Superbly written!
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Thank you so much!
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It seems my comment didn’t record. So here goes again
This is a very good take, and very well written. I like it enormously.
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Thank you again! Your comment is recorded, and I’ve responded.
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Okay. 🙂
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Oh, this is really good. Very well penned (typed) 🙂
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Thank you, Crispina!
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🙂
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