Mirage

mirage of life

keeps hope floating around

just enough to live

what we call fate reminds

us of the grand illusion

In other words, illusion at Patricia’s Place

7 thoughts on “Mirage”

Patricia says:

October 26, 2017 at 11:45 pm

Beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  October 27, 2017 at 1:06 am
  
  Thanks, Patricia!
  
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Michael says:

October 25, 2017 at 10:02 pm

yes it does Reena…so well done..

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-Eugenia says:

October 25, 2017 at 1:35 pm

Yes! Excellent take on the prompt, Reena.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  October 25, 2017 at 1:37 pm
  
  Thanks!
  
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Rashmi Sortur says:

October 25, 2017 at 9:14 am

I liked your poetry on Mirage the lines are composed so beautifully

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  October 25, 2017 at 12:13 pm
  
  Thank you, Rashmi!
  
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