Unpainted Stories

textures of history

arouse curiosity

I touch

to feel the spirit

but it has disappeared

aeons ago

 

left behind are

interpretations

perspectives

and convenient tales

colored by

biased eyes

 

give me a voice

a maiden script

I will be

a soul reader

to decipher

unpainted stories

 

Photo Challenge #186 at MLMM

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http://www.richarddavisphotography.com/travel-photography/reverend-zombies-house-of-voodoo-daily-photo/

3 thoughts on “Unpainted Stories

  1. I really like how you’ve presented this poem – the words seem so carefully chosen, and they sit in the mind and tongue, almost like a bit of rough sandpaper – just “gritty” enough to know they have weight and presence, but they are altogether graceful and refined. This is a wonderful dimension and complexity to this feeling – which for me, adds an amazing depth to this – especially as we read our way to the third stanza – brilliant culmination! Give me a voice – a maiden script – how stunning!

    Superb Reena! 😀

    Thanks for playing the Photo Challenge this week 🙂

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      1. well, sometimes that’s just the best aspect, right? the words will flow and come, and we’re not even aware of it in the moment, and maybe not even later … sometimes we notice it, other times, it’s someone else reading it that points it out – and that’s all okay – as long as you enjoy the process of writing and creating, then it’s more than enough 🙂

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