Unnoticed

Posted on by Reena Saxena

I was repulsed by the ugliness and stink of manure. After a lapse of time, the beauty of flowers that bloomed captivated me. Seeds and soil cannot do much, without the help of water and sunlight.

I am the seed, but I thrive in underground darkness. The beauty of the external world shocks, as my eyes flutter to get used to the light and wind.

The hiatus takes away all credit from me, as the environment steps in to bask in the glory of beauty.

The ultimate truth

of all productivity

is symbiosis

islands of excellence just

perish unseen, unheard

 

Sunday Writing Prompt #222

7 thoughts on “Unnoticed”

  2. How interesting Reena šŸ™‚

    This leaves one thinking – just sitting with the images, so loaded and rich and full – and yielding to the words, the whole process – and the direction you’ve taken in this interpretation is many layered – very enjoyable –

    and I particularly liked the ending – the idea of process being symbiosis – an ultimate truth – quite so ….. and the closing lines – they too offer something complex – purposeful in our understanding and also “misunderstanding” in this whole aspect we call life.

    Great job Reena – and thanks for playing the Sunday Writing Prompt šŸ™‚ I hope you have a wonderful week ahead.

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