Her voice trembled with indignation as she spat out the words, “Draupadi, the Princess of Panchal was gambled away in a game of dice, by her husband, Yudhishthir. The villains of the tale who proceed to strip her, are warned, rebuked and cursed, but not effectively stopped. What remains a mystery in the tale, is that why the otherwise strong Draupadi, trained in martial arts not retaliate with violence?”
“Stop telling stories and do what you are asked to do,” a cold voice dictated.
“The die has been cast aeons ago and the world awaits a logical end to the story, here, not on the battlefield of Kurukshetra.”
The chamber reverberated with the sound of gunshots, one for each century of humiliation.

Nice,
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Immediate , strong and vibrant – well done ..
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Wow, this is so graphic I almost ducked down beneath my desk! Nice one.
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two words: ‘yow!’*
* a compliment, if not somewhat smartassed delivery. I liked your Six for the ‘scope’, the size of the scene.
This is something I’m struggling with my other (fiction) writing. I can show the world/a scene through the eyes of a single character, but that ends up being a smaller picture. There is something to invoking (and, perhaps by way of implying) a much bigger canvas.
I get that from this Six, this week.
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Thanks a lot!
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A frightening scenario.
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You are right.
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Haunting.
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Well done!
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There’s a lot of punch here, in just six sentences! Nice job.
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Thank you so much, Deborah!
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Like that last line. Solid. (Violent, but solid)
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Eventually even the worm turns. Well told!
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Very nice.
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A beautiful interpretation of a great epic that brought forth the eternal shame surrounding the event. Good writing, Reena.
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