I wish I could freeze
memories like berries
and then, wait for spring.
Will they thaw again, or dry
like your forgotten love?
Inspired by Weekly Tanka Prompt Challenge -30
https://ramblingsofawriter2016.com/2017/02/01/weekly-tanka-prompt-challenge-week-30-spring-berries/
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Those lines are effective! 🙂
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Thanks!
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Oh yes! Very nice, Reena.
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So true, I forget, there’s always another day to expose our feelings, thank you….
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You did what I failed to do, added the human touch, beautifully done!
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All of us bring our touch to what we write. And everybody succeeds, because we can never fail to be ourselves. Thanks, Mick Talbot!
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Very interesting tanka, nicely done giving me a different feeling about those two words “Spring and Berries” Thanks, nice picture. Have a nice day,
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Thanks!
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This is so lovely.
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Thank you, Helene!
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